Birds.

 

Who encarved these beautiful birds,

and filled their hearts with love?

Who, then fixed in place those wings,

and gave them skies to fly?

The world must have been made for them - heavenly creatures,

always close to their motherland with those exquisite, divine features.

The pilgrims of some destination unknown,

Those birds flying in the sky.

Like those lovers lost in each other's eyes,

waiting for nothing to come

-No matter how close death is,

their journey  to life goes on.

That melodious music must be some kind of victory song,

maybe that's why it marks the arrival of morning.

What do you write in those letters, you post in their claws?

They must have had a peek inside, that's why they're laughing hard.

Author's Note

Just for fun. ;-)

Reviews

[KurKota]

This is really beautiful. This is a splendid view of birds, and appropriate questions asked of them. Living in an area that has many different type of birds, both that make use of my feeders and the type that are more "wild"...what you ask of them is very beautiful ! I watch soaring type birds riding thermals some afternoons that seem to take them out of sight completely, and one wonders what part of heaven do they live ? Very nice writing .... thank you for sharing.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

We all love birds, don't we? ;) Thank you.

[KurKota]

Yes, we do......you are welcome, my friend !

[KAOlmsted]

I love the ending. Excellent work here.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'm glad. Thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Of course!

[lz.angst]

I've always been intrigued to birds and flying, i loved reading it.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a beautiful write, much enjoyed reading this and how it expresses its
messages through the birds...
excellent :)

[Marie]

This is rather nice.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[WingsToFly]

beautifully done. I liked the starting, "Who encarved these beautiful birds,
and filled their hearts with love?
Who, then fixed in place those wings,
and gave them skies to fly?" really profound. Well done

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Night]

Beautifully done my friend...I liked this one...=)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Ha, nice twist at the end, I love that! Really stunning poetry, and a majestic picture. Very enjoyable read. Made me smile. :-)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

:) Thank you

[I, Rene]

Birds are indeed wonderful, there is just something so divine about something so small if it is fearless atop one's finger. lovely write.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you.

[Jack...]

I beautiful tirbute to our fine feathered friends. Very nice.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)