I have seen.

I met people - humble, sweet and subtle.

I met people - caring and daring but brittle.

I've gone places - barren and lush green.

I've gone places - sunshine and rain I've seen.

I met strangers - pleasing and insane.

I've met friends - reflection of my desires, boon or a bane.

But family - the people who are mine.

And home - place which is divine.

I've seen heaven - pious and protected.

I've seen hell - evil infected.

I found love - madness and agony.

I've found love - you and me.

Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I don't know...heaven seems nice but I think all the really interesting people will probably be in hell. Most certainly, all the ones who knew how to have fun...(laughing) Now...EVIL...evil to me is self righteous hypocrites who make up rules for everyone else while they proclaim they are immune to punishment. Evil is killing and stealing and glorifying war in the name of God. True, there are other evils... but they are small compared to evils sold to impoverished souls and disguised as goodness. Just my thoughts...

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I don't even think there is a hell or heaven or anything such.

[Frieda P]

I love this little peek into you, it's got so much honesty and integrity.

'I met strangers - pleasing and insane.'

Have we met? ;-) Nice one!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Frieda. :)

Not yet. But I'm sure we will. ;)

[Frieda P]

Ha, at least you're forewarned my friend! ;-)

My pleasure, always...

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I like doing things I'm warned not to do. :D

[Frieda P]

Ahhh, I knew I liked you! ;-P

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Are you sure? ;)

[Frieda P]

But of course, never liked to play it safe myself. We could get into a lot of trouble together. ;-)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Sounds fun. ;)

[Carolann Dowsett]

I love this a real reflection of your life and the things you have felt and dreamed, with those you have met and the things you have seen. Nicely written :)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you Carolann. :)

[Carolann Dowsett]

Welcome :-)

[Night]

Sweet poem, nice imagery...a great write my friend...=)

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[Night]

You're welcome...=)

[keyvan]

this is a lovely poem.but try write alittle imaginary...Imagination who be real....and this part is amazing "I've found love - you and me." thank you...

[Mehak Mushtaq]

I'll try to do that, sir. Thank you. :)

[keyvan]

you're welcome.....I wait your opinion on my poem.....

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Sure.