Something divine.

Divine Love.

"It was when I realized that I love you that you had gone. There's a part of me, a certain part that isn't ready to get over you, that'll forget all the hurt you did, that'll forgive every betrayal, that'll never be willing to be without you, a part that'll always love you:

And you should know how much of me is you,

And how much of me is left.

For, I'll put the rest of what is 

left of me in your hands,

You should see that my soul is a

shadow of me and reflection of you.

"I", is not left and not left alone

For, thee has this part of the whole,

whole.

I wished good. Thee (you and me) wished divine.

I cursed, granted. Thee cursed, blessed."

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

At your ageit is best to remeber that nature cannot tell the difference between love and lust. It is natures demand that you be blinded by it The reason is simple top make us reproduce and stave off exstinction.Love wioll force this on you and wont ease up till you are at least 30 to 35.So enjoy it and try not to suffer too much

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Hmm I will keep that in mind. :)

[David Lewis Paget]

I find this very obscure, especially the final two lines. I would avoid semantics if I were you, until you can explain yourself in simpler terms.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

hmm I agree. It is obscure. I'll take care of that in future.

[Pawprints]

This, to me, speaks almost sadly. It reads as a person falling apart for another. Beautiful, no matter what the message :)

[AYVID N]

Unconditional Love is what this is about. A rare poem on love...a gem...

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

I like the language in this, though I am not sure exactly what it portends to.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

It's an expression of love and faith.

[David Scott]

Not feeling this one my friend...
Reads awkwardly to me.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Hmm. It's okay.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Not all great minds think alike. :)

[quinfinn]

now your poetry is reaching out to touch that part of me which few ever do....this is directly from the heart, so profoundly beutiful to read and , yes, to feel. magnificent write!

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)

[KAOlmsted]

Very nicely expressed. Thank you for sharing this with us.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Anytime. :)

[KeeD]

This was a bittersweet tale of endless love. It defines human relationships in my perception thought very well. We may love till our very last breath, we may believe we love beyond that too. Sometimes we may give up before we start and sometimes we might give in to something else but a piece of love from every encounter always lingers, sometimes it might be sowed deep within the self never to show face again but always there and someday a reminder of better or worse days. You're writing depicts true emotion and meaning and sparks a flame in the readers mind and heart which makes it be cautious about how love works but still wants to explore it so badly and the whole fact that a reader can reflect and question his perception of an authors work is brilliance. So if none of that made sense to you all I want to say is I loved the poem it had meaning to me and was a wonderful write. Great job. -Kee.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

It did make sense :) Here, I'm talking of human relationships and divine, both.
Thank you. :)

[KeeD]

:D now that I re-read it I get the whole divine perspective :D are you influenced in anyway by the Iliad or Norse mythology?

[Mehak Mushtaq]

:) No, I haven't even heard of it. :/

[KeeD]

Oh :D cool it might be something that interests you if you ever get the chance to read it or watch a documentary. Ancient mythology always fascinates me

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Oh, I will look it up.

[Kenneth The Poet]

A beautiful write. One that could probably use a bit of formatting, otherwise it is solid.

[Mehak Mushtaq]

Thank you. :)