Fucked Up Lines

Depressing point in my life. I know now that everything has its polarity. But back then, me thinking everything was working against me, I wrote this.

I drew something today.

First glance;

it's intricate,

it's how I feel,

it's me.

Second glance;

it all shifted.

It's uneven,

it's distasteful,

it's just a pile of fucked up lines.

I analyzed this thought and realized that it accurately describes my whole life.

Everything I do,

everything I say,

is what I think fits.

What I think is right.

When in reality,

It's just that same old pile of fucked up lines.

Author's Note

Say what ya will. I'll edit if necessary.

Reviews

[Gray]

Is there another way of saying fucked up that would relate. It seems to me poetry should be more than just a common phrase everyone's heard already. In other words, poetry is hard. lol