I Tried

I tried

To satisfy you

I tried

To make you happy

I tried

But I didn't succeed

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

At least you have tried...Bravo......................

[Fantasygirl46]

yay!! i helped julia!! :D i love this poem its short and kinda deep :p :D

[Trigorin]

Not bad, and you manage to tell the story in a very short space, but I do somewhat think that there's really nothing here that hasn't been said before. The brevity works against you in that regard.

[Lulu]

Thank you!