Chapter 2: Let The Stalking Begin

Chapter 2: Let The Stalking Begin

A Chapter by Lulu

We arrived at our favorite Store; Strike 1. The linoleum floors squeaking behind us, we made our way all throughout the store. By the time we got out of there we were ready to eat. We then traveled ourselves to the food court. I ordered crispy chicken wings, Jasmyne ordered a cheeseburger. I noticed that Jasmyne kept on ironically staring over my shoulder. As if on the lookout for something.

"Jasmyne, what are you staring at?" I asked her, then I noticed that she froze.

"C'mon we got to get out of here!"

"Dude! What's going on!?!" I raced to catch up to her. She quickly stopped, causing me to bump into her.

"Remember that guy we saw on the motorcycle?" She whispered slash screamed.

"Yeah, the crazy one melting in black clothing on this hot summer day..." I replied waiting for her reaction.

"Well, I just saw him!" She said vividly.

"Okay... Does that give you any reason for to run off like that?"

"Kaely, he had a gun in his pocket." She replied fright.

"How did you know?" I tested her. Jasmyne was the kind of girl who would do anything to get out of a certain plan or event. My sweaty palms took her shoulders as she froze. All of a sudden we heard a loud gunshot. My first instinct was to duck. But Jasmynes' idea was run.

"He was staring right at me the whole time Kaely!" She said while we were running. Swiftly and like a lion we slipped into the nearest store. Just to find out the nearest store to us was also the nearest store to him. We hid in the dressing room trying to open the window.

"How can he be doing something like this? It's the mall!" I questioned. Jasmyne and I ran all the way to the park together. My shoes started giving me painful blisters from all that running. We sat down on the closest bench, where we decided to catch our breathe. I checked the time on my phone. 9:34. We left at around 9:35.

On the way home we noticed an awkward presence or feeling surrounding us. I decided to text my sister to see if she was alright.

Me: Hey is everything alright?

Sandra: You have to come home now!!

Me: Why?

Sandra: GET YOUR BUTT HOME RIGHT NOW!!!!!

Me: Okay I'm going...look who's taking her responsibilities in action...

As soon as I spotted the front door I knew something was wrong. Front door wide open with broken windows, walking inside was worse...

It was neat, but the rooms were a mess. As if someone lost something. Sandra got all her money stolen, Jasmyne lost a real gold ring, but I didn't lose anything.

"Are we going to call the cops or what?" I stared at Sandra as if she knew something that we didn't.

"I already did, they said that this kind of stuff has been happening frequently and their on the case." Sandra informed me as if she knew what I was thinking.

Later on that night I was awaken by a strange noise coming from outside. I got up and walked towards the window, the frosty bright moon shining down on me like a spotlight, the stars twinkling in the sky, as the breeze up above carried thoughts and secrets from miles away. I looked out into the ocean and all I saw was the waves intimidating the sand and crashing on to them. I crept back to bed and just when I was going to sleep, a pebble being thrown at my window. I ignored the pebble throwing and tried to fall back asleep, however, it didn't stop! As if someone was committed to wake me up. The problem was, I didn't know who it was. I got my comfy sweater off of the chair next to me and got on the floor. I was in fear of whoever it was that was bothering me. Hands and knees I crawled into Jasmynes’ room in order to wake her up. I pinched her cheeks until she finally sat up in bed. Together we sneakily went over to the window and hid under the wooden ledge. The pebbles continued; *tap tap tap*.

 “Okay on the count of three…” I whispered to her.

“One, two,three!” We quickly opened the window just to find something that absolutely took our breathe away…



© 2013 Lulu


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Nice Chapter except moved little quick but other than tht it was great, I wonder wats out tht window


Posted 12 Years Ago


you should add more dialoge less thought

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lulu

12 Years Ago

The last paragraph there's hardly supposed to be any dialogue and I try to balance them out a bit, b.. read more
Team_Jaward_Gale

12 Years Ago

np
cliffhanger gr! editing as per usual, but I'm sure you'll get to it eventually :). I want to know what they saw when they opened up the window!! I must know, haha, keep the goodness coming :D good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think this chapter moved a little quickly, I like it though. I wonder what they saw when they opened the window! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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