Chapter 1: First Appearance

The boiling sunrays bursted against my olive skin as I exited the school building. Surrounding me, all I heard was: "Bye Kaely I'll miss you!!" or "See you next year!!" It was the last day of junior year at Maple Wood High School. I was in search for my bestfriend who was standing by the marble water fountain making out with her boyfriend Caleb. Her hipster self made her stand out from all the other girls. Instead of skirts and flats, it was shorts,   mini shirts, ripped nylons etc. for me and her. 
"Sorry to interupt Jasmyne but we have a beach to catch, and I have hot boys to meet!" I yelled at her.
"Bye I'll miss you babe." She said soothingly with her Dolce and Cabana sunglasses. They tried making out again but I pulled her long blonde hair in the direction of my sisters car. 
"Heeeyyy girlies! How was your last day of junior year?!" Said my insane sister Sandra. She had aqua blue with purple hair and a bunch of peircings. 
"Good!" We said together.
"Ready to hit the road?" She asked.
"More than ever!!" Said Jasmyne.
By the next 15 minutes we were at the deserted highway. The rocky golden orange mountains beside us with trees along the side. We were on our way to our mothers private beach house. 
"So what are you going to do when we get there? We'll get there around 5" She asked.
"Catch a wave." Jasmyne demanded.
"While yall be doing that imma hit the club for a while. Okay?" Replied Sandra. 
"I'm surprised our mom trusted us with a 26 year old jobless girl who smokes crack and gets drunk." I said to her. 
Just then a loud roaring motorcycle appeared behind us. 
"What's wrong with that dude?  Wearing black on this steaming weather!" Questioned Jasmyne.
"Who knows and who cares!?"

We arrived there at around 5:30. I climbed up to my room, a neat white and black room with the most beautiful view of the turquoise sea. Just then Jasmyne barged in.
"Let's go explore!!"
"Explore what Jasmyne?"
"The mall, c'mon!"
"Okay let me grab my purse."
"Oh yeah! Your sister said that if she arrives home drunk that we're bringing her up to her room."
"Pht my butt!" I responded.

Author's Note

I am sorry its short because I can't incorporate the next chapter into this due to the title. Otherwise it would've been named "first and second appearance"
This chapter basically just introduces the setting and characters and stuff so don't get all feisty on me.

Reviews

[quixotic_rose]

A little bit of editing needed, but other than that it was really good for a background information chapter :) I'm intrigued for what's to come!

[Lulu]

Thanks

[Jessica]

I like the character's personalities so far. It's easy to relate to and fun to read! I'm curious about what happens!

[Owlgirl]

More questions, and you still have my wrapped attention. Great job! I love your characters names! I cannot wait to see what happens next. :)
Are you having fun with this? :p

[Lulu]

I am having so much fun and thank you!! ^.^ The second chapeter may really draw you in :)