Prologue

A Chapter by Lulu

The girl sat there as the crisp dawn arose. Out of breathe she walked upon the shore, waiting in fear for the man. Loud footsteps thudded far way from behind the large bouldozer she was hiding behind. She cautiously turned around to find the man in his usual outfit; messy hair, black worn jacket, long black cargo pants, and black leather boots. As the waves rapidly hit the seashore she decided to take the risk.

Shoes in hand, she ran as fast as lightning towards the water. He got closer, and closer.
Jumping in to the large waves she swam out into the crystal clear ocean. Just enough to get away from him. The salty warm turquoise blue water has saved her. Away from the wind away from all her troubles. The steady breeze blew above as she decided to dive under water. She swam to the old rundown lighthouse in hope of meeting her bestfriend, who was also on the run.

An ear piercing scream arose as she swam to shore. Her natural instinct told her to run- fast towards the lighthouse. Her long golden shiny brown hair flowing behind her. Slipping on her shoes, she climbed up the creaky jagged stairs to the old light house. She thought of all the fatal scenarios and how she was supposed to meet her bestfriend.

The girl quietly opened the door to find her bestfriend sitting on the floor waiting for her. They hugged and cried, her friends long blonde hair soothing her by reminding her that she wasn't alone. She soon realized that the terrifying scream wasn't from the lighthouse. Just then they were inturrupted by a loud bang on the door. With no second thoughts they knew who it was. Yet they knew that there was no escape...

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© 2012 Lulu

Author's Note

There is no diologue for a reason, so please don't complain about that. This is kinda short cause it's a prologue but I promise that I'llmake long chapters. 3 reviews and I'll write more. Any advice? Leave it down below :) Enjoy!!

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Team_Jaward_Gale

nice word choices

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thanks :)

12 Years Ago

Jessica

I loved the descriptions! I could see everything happening in my mind! It really grabbed my attention. I think using the cliffhanger at the end was a good idea too, it definitely urges the reader to read more!

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you soo much :)

Owlgirl

Wow! This is awesome! I need to know more! Write! Write! Write! The I find the no diolouge thing particularly intruiging because it's so unique, and you do it so well! So many questions, wow, speed write I'm happy! Speed write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

I'll write as fast as I can especially on my spare time o.o lol thank you very much :)

12 Years Ago

Haha, and your welcome, it really is amazing!

quixotic_rose

This is really good, it captured my attention and drew me in. I'm questioning who the man was and why he was after the girl, they are running but from what. I'm so intrigued as to what's going on, you need to post more! haha good work :)