I'd die for you

can't find a thing to say. sorry

They’d finished making love and lay, spent

They were sprawled in the shade, dozing off

He looked into her eyes and he went:

I’d die for you, I’m not showing off

She purred: pray tell how many times, dude

And climbed in the dumpster, looking for food

Reviews

[paperfox]

Woody, my good man ... I simply insist you meet a pal of mine I met on this very day. He's the 3rd Musketeer. He's probably a tad more romantic in spirit. But that's what's great about him.

And it would be a weeping tale of sorrow should you guys miss out on each other.

Today is one of those rare days me thinks :)

[Woody]

Hi mate. thanks heaps for stopping by. I'd be glad to read your friend, if he's on this site.

[paperfox]

add me cos I don't have a clue how to do it

[Woody]

I'll send a friend request

[Matching Socks]

I'm guessing he'd die for her 2 or 3 times at least before looking for some new pu...
Err, I mean cat. I don't know why but this seemed like a conversation between two cats to me.

[Woody]

I've always known you were a clever girl :))
now is it 7 or 9? what's the general belief?
read moreI've always known you were a clever girl :))
now is it 7 or 9? what's the general belief?
thank you Dear.

[Matching Socks]

I believe North American cats have 9 lives. :)

[Woody]

there you have it then! let him shooow how deep is his looove...
thanks Dear :)

[Matching Socks]

You're welcome. :)

[wordman]

well woody you like rhyme...roses are red violets are blue i liked this crazy poem
and debra did too..but instead of dying for the lady buy her a cheese burger
or a meal,after she has eaten maybe she will let you feel lol

[Woody]

haha that's a completely different poem but a funny one. you should put it out there :)
who said there was a lady involved? :))

[wordman]

oh hell,my bad

[Woody]

you'll have to admit that I would be more twisted than I actually am to write about love making then fetching food from a dumpster, Right? :)
give me some credit.

[wordman]

well i got you going didn`t i woody lol

[SyberRose]

Profound and unique...even homeless people fall in love...enjoyed...Rose

[Woody]

thank you very much Rose. gald you enjoyed it.
this is a very interesting take on this silly little thing.

[SyberRose]

that was the first thing that came to mind ha.

[Woody]

I rarely write "serious stuff", I'm afraid. a closer look might reveal a completely different picture :)

[SyberRose]

Yes haa...two cats

[Woody]

:)))))))))))

[Beccy]

Three time three I would die for thee,
surrender my life to the God;
Oh, and whilst you're in the dumpster dear,
pray find me a nice piece of Cod. :)

Beccy.

[Woody]

aaah but how can I compare to thee, Beccy?
this is more elegant. more poetic. love it :)

[...]

Woody...shakes head...you ARE unique! You know, a praying mantis does die for her! lmao
You're awesome :)

[Woody]

you're so sweet Lynn. thanks a ton (probably too much but, heck, you're worth it)
what a pleasure to know you like my silly writes :)

[...]

I like your "silly" writes. They make me laugh :)

[M.E.Lyle]

Woody, you old stray cat. How have you been. Another masterpiece I see. A bit twisted, but then, what else is new.
Love your stuff my friend, always have.

[Woody]

haha indeed what else is new?
hello Mike. long time no see. sorry I haven't reviewed your work for some time. I tend to review those who are on line or those who have reviewed me (to return the favour). but I'll get back to you. promise.
thank you dear friend. so glad you liked this.

[M.E.Lyle]

Well, I've been away for a while, and I'm only back temporarily. I'm taking an extended break. I'm not in prison or anything CRAZY like that...only on a break.

[Woody]

thank you very much for putting my mind at rest, Mike. no, prison has not crossed my mind. I thought you were abducted by the Mafia who sent a ransom note to your wife who couldn't raise the money and... nuff said. this is material for a new story :)

[M.E.Lyle]

Yikes, and perhaps I am my own abductor, stole away in time.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

LMSO! Thanks for the laugh Woody although I won't be catty about it lol!

[Woody]

haha thank YOU for stopping in. glad this made laugh, John :)

[~]

Does he have seven lives too?? :D witty and fun!! You bring smiles, always!

[Woody]

that's what they say, isn't it?
thank you Dear. great to make you smile.

[Lydia Shutter]

Dumpster diving in the afterglow? Alrighty then! Actually, you are showing a darker side of life here. You are nothing if not unique.....and I am thrilled you are writing some poems along with your stories. Lydi**

[Woody]

this is what prompted me to write this one:
- I'd die for you
- how many times?
then thought of the cats in my neighbourhood dumpsters.
I'm going to change she said into she purred.
thanks a million Lydi. you make me want to continue writing poems :)

[Lydia Shutter]

:) good! Always happy to be an inspiration to another writer!

[Great Aunt Astri]

Actually I think It might help some humans to have that attitude !!!!!. I really enjoyed the poem!

[Woody]

thank you Aunt Astri. attitude? looking for food in a dumpster? hahaa.
glad you enjoyed it.