I'd die for you

can't find a thing to say. sorry

They’d finished making love and lay, spent

They were sprawled in the shade, dozing off

He looked into her eyes and he went:

I’d die for you, I’m not showing off

She purred: pray tell how many times, dude

And climbed in the dumpster, looking for food

Reviews

[paperfox]

Woody, my good man ... I simply insist you meet a pal of mine I met on this very day. He's the 3rd Musketeer. He's probably a tad more romantic in spirit. But that's what's great about him.

And it would be a weeping tale of sorrow should you guys miss out on each other.

Today is one of those rare days me thinks :)

[Woody]

Hi mate. thanks heaps for stopping by. I'd be glad to read your friend, if he's on this site.

[paperfox]

add me cos I don't have a clue how to do it

[Woody]

I'll send a friend request

[Einstein Noodle]

life on the mean streets ... one can always find love ... or at the very least mutual momentary escape .. funny how if they were between silk sheets in a penthouse apartment ... they might experience exactly the same thing ... so sad all the emptiness and hollow places we try to fill ... with so many wrong things .. guess i looked a little deeper into this one sir .. on first read through i did enjoy the social commentary and humor :)
E.
ps read the comments below and i think you should edit it according to the Kings English or leave punctuation out ... ;)

[Woody]

thank you so much Einstein. you're such a thoughtful reviewer. honestly though, I wish my poems were as deep as you perport them to be. sadly, my objective is to entertain only.

[Einstein Noodle]

mission accomplished for me sir! :)

[Terpsichore]

A real twist in the (tail.) :) and I loved the reference to a cat's nine lives.

Great fun and really well written Woody. T

[Woody]

thanks heaps Terps. such a pleasure to see you enjoy my writes.

[Roland Petrov]

A short poetic version of your stories: you lead the reader into thinking something, and it isn't what you think! Some of your poems are, well, not quite like your amazing stories, but this one is. Well writ!

[Woody]

thank you so much my friend. I know I'm not much of a poet but I'm glad this one holds the road.
read morethank you so much my friend. I know I'm not much of a poet but I'm glad this one holds the road.
yes I enjoy misleading the reader. I love springing something on him/her when he/she least expects it.

[Troy Henson]

how many times indeed.

enjoyed this Woody.

[Woody]

thanks a lot Troy. glad you enjoyed my pseudo-poetry :)

[Tate Morgan]

Oh that's good how many times
Lol I could just hear a woman saying that lol

[Woody]

thanks heaps Tate. a woman, you say? unless she was a cat in a previous life :)
glad this made you laugh.

[Moonie]

Haha..pray tell how many times, dude...that sounds like a punk Sherlock...if he admits to more than 9 times, then that tomcat is worth something...

[Woody]

thanks a bunch Moon. sorry about the late reply.
if he admits to more than 9, then he's lying, I'm sure :)

[Moonie]

Good to hear from you again..!! :)) the news kinda had me worried.
I cannot begin to imagine what a deep scar this incident would leave.

[Woody]

thanks a lot for the thought Moon. yes, no doubt the world's gone completely berserk.
I'm still under the shock. I may sound pessimistic but I'm sure there's more to come unless the whole world unites to eradicate this modern-day scourge.

[Moonie]

I agree on that.
Gosh, there is so much hate in this world, it scares me.

[Mr_M]

haha! excellent work matey

[Woody]

thanks ol' chum. happy this made you laugh.

[guy drori]

Interesting choice of words...I liked your line breaks, and the scene here is very clear. Glad I read it :)

[Woody]

so glad you liked it, Guy :) thanks heaps.

[Gaston Villanueva]

Humorous and unique
The organization of the poem was shipshape as well!

[Woody]

thank you very much Gaston. glad you saw the humour in this one :)

[B]

How adorable .............................

[Woody]

thanks heaps Nisreenaa :) glad you liked it.