I'd die for you

can't find a thing to say. sorry

They’d finished making love and lay, spent

They were sprawled in the shade, dozing off

He looked into her eyes and he went:

I’d die for you, I’m not showing off

She purred: pray tell how many times, dude

And climbed in the dumpster, looking for food

Reviews

[paperfox]

Woody, my good man ... I simply insist you meet a pal of mine I met on this very day. He's the 3rd Musketeer. He's probably a tad more romantic in spirit. But that's what's great about him.

And it would be a weeping tale of sorrow should you guys miss out on each other.

Today is one of those rare days me thinks :)

[Woody]

Hi mate. thanks heaps for stopping by. I'd be glad to read your friend, if he's on this site.

[paperfox]

add me cos I don't have a clue how to do it

[Woody]

I'll send a friend request

[ROXANE DORSEY]

very very nice poem. i enjoyed this one also. thanks again.

[EMMIE]

Too funny. Now I know where to come if ever I feel low!

[Woody]

haha and I'll be glad to oblige. thanks again Emmi. you're too kind.

[B. Boileau]

First she has you in her claws... the next thing you know, your going dumpster diving... that's feline love for ya, go figure. I had a great chuckle with Woody ! You are one of the masters at satire

bill

[Woody]

Bill, you make my evening with your kind words. thanks heaps, mate. such joy to know this made you chuckle.

[barleygirl]

I love that your poem balances beautifully on the cusp of seeming like it's written about 2-legged lovers . . . or no, wait . . . it's about 4-legged lovers! I totally get that securing food is the highest form of cat adoration & I love that the guy is doing the dumpster diving. How did we humans get this part so wrong? (I'm still looking for a man who will cook & BBQ for me!) *heh! heh! heh!*

[Woody]

haha I just love leading the reader up the garden path. nothing wrong with cooking. I always make omelettes for my wife. thank you, Dear.

[Abhilash Hegde]

This tickled my funny bone, big way :) :)
It's always, enjoyable to read your poems, woody.
This one was easy, light and funny read.
Enjoyed it!

Thanks :)

[Woody]

much appreciated Abhilash. it's always a pleasure to see the reader enjoy my silly writes.

[James]

I read your poem with some great intent
By the end I found myself completely bent
Over laughing historically

[Woody]

haha thank you my friend. so glad it made you laugh. a few have missed the joke.

[mou]

very nice...you are the king at both story and poem..where you write funny story , parallel y you write poem in a flow but pain is reflected,,yeah should learn something from here..you are right this cafe is a place for learning new..

[Woody]

haha too much honour. thank you very much mou. I'm glad you liked this one.

[Insight "MH"]

We men only need it said just once and we are shackled, woe is me...woe is me :(

[Woody]

haha woe is us.
I hope you liked the feline love making :)

[Insight "MH"]

I liked every meow that happened between them :)

[Woody]

I'm purring with contentment.

[wolfshrew]

I feel a kinship to the woman in this poem and have certainly met the man, at the very least, a handful of time. Perhaps it is the feline expressive point that get me, this reads so many ways to me in such a short amount of words. Can't wait to read more of what you've got.

[Woody]

thanks a bunch wolfshrew. a word of advice: don't take what I read too seriously :)

[Woody]

oops! I meant "what I write"