Broken

Its about how i broke two hearts with so little words

Broken

My soul trapped in Hell

So little words spoken

But so much destruction

I promised this wouldn't happen

As I held you in my arms

I promised so much

Now all of it meant nothing

I told you I wasn't the same

And yet I did what they all did

I didn't want to hurt you

But I knew I would

I wanted you too fly away

Find someone worth sharing your life with

I wanted to stop hurting you

Stop making you so sad and mad

I ended up braking my heart and yours

Something I will never forget

Something that will haunt me until I die

Even in afterdeath

I wanted to spend the rest of my life with you

Grow old with you

And now look at us

Entraped in nothingness

Lost in the depths of space

Searching for the broken pieces of our hearts

forever and for years to come...

Author's Note

Sucky I know but im at the library venting I write better then this but please give me some reviews

Reviews

[Kitty Davies]

i understand that you're venting, so I won't give you grief on formatting or choice of words. A good start, but I'd read it over a few times and make a few edits.