In His Arms She Found Bliss

So i was at this poetry slam thingy and we were doing this activity where you would be handed a topic at random and you were to come up with a scene/poem on your topic on the spot. I got the topic "Romance" and this is what came out of my cranium at that moment. My friend wrote it down for me as i spoke so yeah, here you are o-o

Enjoy~

 

They kissed so passionately her heart ached.

The way his tongue moved with hers, the way his soft lips touched hers. She felt completely at bliss..

She knew there  never will be, any other place for her than in his arms.

His arms. They way they hold her.  So firm but gentle, his strength on her body only pressuring the hunger he has for her. 

Little currents of bliss shock through her whenever his hands touch her.

She loses her mind, she loses her world.

Her only focus is him and the way he makes her feel. The feeling so beautiful and enjoyable..

The feeling that takes her on a trip.

She's never felt her heart beat so hard for a man.

She's never looked into the eyes of a man without fear.

She's never had the courage to love.

She knows he is her first and her last.

Her first love, her first true kiss, her first true passion. 

She knows that they will never part

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Incredible !
An ambition of mine is to write
about my feelings, so they appear
exactly how I feel at the time, the
elation, excitement, arousal.
You have done that. Your writing
sends out the personal vibrations of
your being. The faster beating of your
heart, scent of heat rising up from you,
Sweating hands and brow. Exciting .
Love to see more of thiis.
----- John

[VannahBanana]

This is good, considering it was spoken and not written. You have the idea. And it's forming somewhere. Maybe this can be a part in a book, a story. It's good you know how to speak up when you have something in mind.

[lolfiary]

OMG!! That was so amazing how you mangaged to come up with that on the spot your just like wow!