Stiched-up Hearts

A short, short, SHORT poem that I wrote about how my boyfriend and I got where we are now.

Crying on the floor,

Your shattered heart was thrown about.

Tears flooded from your eyes,

And splattered the snow-covered ground.

Crawling up to you,

I picked up the tattered shreds of your heart.

I gently placed them beside the broken bits of mine,

The ground mixed with your tears and mine.

Over time, our tears subsided,

And our pains disappeared.

Our broken hearts were remedied,

But were indistinguishable.

Our hearts had blended,

Just as our tears once did.

We share our hearts,

Now and forever.

Reviews

[CircusNerd]

wow. this was really touching! two hearts that cry together will always find a tie between them no matter what. good job!

[Orahemae December]

AWWWS. i loveid you babe!!! thats so sweet.

[Sseoni]

What an amazing poem! It was so beautiful and detailed! I loved it! It was full of emotion and passion! It was a wonderful poem! :D

[Aiden- Aiko- Kiyomi]

Wow. You seem to like the theme of tears and broken hearts. You talk about them frequently but i still like this but yes it is very short anyways overall its very good. NOW REVIEW SOME OF MINE!!! thank you.