You broke it

You broke it

A Poem by Broken Wings

I gave it away
My heart
I gave it to you
Hoping you'd keep it safe,
But you just broke it 
And gave it back
I had no clue what to do
I just looked at you
The broken heart sitting in my hands
I jut wanted it safe
But you broke it...
In your own two hands 

© 2012 Broken Wings


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You gave it to the wrong person.
Now you know, make sure that it
is all fixed and like new, then find
the right person who will love and
cherish it for the rest of his life.
Then give your heart to him.
Beautiful poem, a little sad, but that`s
the way it is with a broken heart.

----- John

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is quite a nice flowing poem. My suggestion would be to give it a bit of punctuation to make sure each section had the drama it desires. Good write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Such a sad and a heartbreaking poem...
So full of emotions and sadness
Wonderful write :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on February 25, 2012
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Broken Wings
Broken Wings

Minot , ND



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Hey umm I'm courtney. I'm one of those that no matter how many times you tell her she's pretty she won't believe it. Well on here no one knows me so I can put my heart out there. I feel music, writing.. more..

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