When you were here

When you were here

There was no tears

The walls were gone

And I was loved

Then you left

Now there's tears

The walls are staying up

And I'm no longer loved

Reviews

[TheSweet]

This is a great piece. Everything is mapped out simply and it's painful. Keep it up.

[Leslie Philibert]

Great poem from somehow so young.And honest.The best poems are always honest and you have presented the way you feel with a lot of truth. Well done.

[Bare trees]

Very sad. Sometimes those walls are a part of life that are hard to break down. Even when we have someone. Life is weird that way. Good poem.

[Ace D Portgas]

Aww this is a sad poem : (

This is something that people like me can relate to it and have felt at one point in our lives and its good to have a poem people can understand

I know I've said it before but I like the flow of your poems while I read them : )