Dear Jon.

He needs to come back
I miss him a lot
It seems as if years
Have already gone

But it's only been months
But he'll never be back
Not for me

So my dearest friend
Wherever you are
Please no we care
And love who you are...

Author's Note

Dedicated to that_guy

Reviews

[Invisible]

a nice sentiment, though i never knew him myself, and i doubt he'll ever see this which would likely be something wished for, but the message is still nice.

[Broken Wings]

Thanks...I really wish he would someday see it though...

[Invisible]

well, one day he might pop back on, maybe he'll come back in a different account, or maybe he already has and hasn't told anyone yet. it's not me though in case you were worried lol

[Trigorin]

You've got a good start here, but there's a few small issues - third line in the last stanza, it should be 'know' instead of 'no', and in the second stanza the two first lines both start with 'but', which is a little jarring and repetitive. The topic is a little overdone, but you've still made an admirable effort consider what you had to work with. Well done.