My heart breaks for you

My heart breaks for you

A Poem by Broken Wings

My love
My forever
My hopes
And my dreams

The love 
The hate
And everything in between

My heart
It beats
And with each beat
It breaks.

With each crack
The more pain
With each moment you're gone
The more it cracks

But don't you worry
Don't you freight 
I'm in pain
But I'm just fine 


My heart may be breaking
And I know it makes you happy
Because it breaks for you.

© 2012 Broken Wings


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sad but also not. like your dying over someone but being reborn from it just the same.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You spin allot of emotions into your words. Your phrasing is good and the piece flows smoothly from page to mind. These words speak much towards the heartaches and pain in life, and the devotions between people. Nicely penned.

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


Broken Wings

12 Years Ago

Thank you Aaron
A nice poem. I like the ending the most.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Broken Wings

12 Years Ago

Thanks
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

You are welcome.
A really good poem!!


Posted 12 Years Ago


Broken Wings

12 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Added on November 14, 2012
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Broken Wings
Broken Wings

Minot , ND



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