Maybe you're right....

I fall to the floor with those words of hate

The ones you spit at me

The ones that make me want to die

The ones that kill me inside

You 

ay to others:

"She's a b***h"

"she's so stupid"

"she should just die"

In case you didn't know....

Those words cut like knives...

Like someone is piercing my heart....

But why? 

Why me?

What did I do to you? 

Can't you just leave me be?

And okay maybe I'm not the sweetest person

And I may not be very smart

And maybe I should die...

But just so you know...

It's your words that keep me alive.

They make me want to fight through the pain....

To keep on living...

To continue my life...

So you may be right....

But this time....

I won't end my life.

Author's Note

Read and tell me what you think please....

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Eventually you'll become bullet proof and words will be just words. Deflect like bullets off Superman's chest or Wonder Woman's bracelets. You're not the only angel with broken wings:) Excellent read and write.

[Broken Wings]

Thank you :)

[BasketballGirl13]

Sometimes we have to realize that they say those hurtful words just to try and tear us down. But real strength comes from rising above and staying strong and proving them wrong. You are great and don't let anyone tell you other wise!
As for this poem...I loved it. I felt the emotion and really connected with this poem. Keep writing!

[Broken Wings]

Thank you very much ^_^

[That_Guy]

The only stupid people I see here are those who would say those hurtful things. While those hateful words do hurt, those who care would hurt far more from losing someone they care about over unjustified hollow words.

[Broken Wings]

Blah blah blah :P I've heard it all before from yew Jon :/

[That_Guy]

just sayin'

[Broken Wings]

But whatever.....haters gonna hate right?

[That_Guy]

always, keep being awesome their hatred is spurned from jealousy

[Broken Wings]

Yea cause I'm sureee awesome :P

[That_Guy]

you know it ;P

[Broken Wings]

I'm not even close to awesome, I'm a loser, the lowest of the low on the food chain. I wouldn't count that as awesome.

[That_Guy]

I think you're awesome. Talented writer, passionate girl, ability to put up with me. = Awesome!

[Broken Wings]

Hah you aren't bad at all. I mean I'm surprised you've put up with me and my whole emoish mood :P

[That_Guy]

well see I'm awesome too, so it's easy for me to spot awesomeness ;)

[Broken Wings]

You're a loser XD

[That_Guy]

I'm way to confident in myself to EVER believe that

[Broken Wings]

Hah well I'm not confident enough...so when people say that. I simply believe it because its true.

[That_Guy]

there are a lot of stupid people out there, don't listen to them

[Broken Wings]

:P can't help it

[That_Guy]

those tricky jerks...

[Broken Wings]

Ergggg :/

[That_Guy]

well said

[Broken Wings]

Sureeee