Our Love

For Her.

Our love is our art.
Something we worked hard together on.
From the times you look in to my eyes and told me you love me,
Together, we painted what we were.

Our love is our time.
Something we spent our life together on.
From the times we planned for our future, our children, our home, together, we forged what we are.

Our love is our everything.
Something I'd be holding on to dearly. From the times I promised myself I won't move on.

The time I'd be spending on waiting, hoping you'd come back.

The art I'd be making about us, wishing you'd see it someday.

Alone, I hope for what we may be.

Author's Note

i am open for suggestions and improvement :) please feel free to leave a comment

Reviews

[ForgottenByTheWorld]

Again, you have painted a pure picture of love and the meaning it holds. Love is something forged as one, and is truly a work of art.

I have only have one piece of criticism (if you can even call it that), and it is that in the fourth and fifth sections that you should stay within one tense. When you use will it talks about a future from this point in time, while would refers to what would have be considered the future in the past. You use would to maintain the future aspect when referring to the past.

Other than that, this is a beautiful poem, and I encourage you to continue writing!

[Andre Peterson]

Absolutely beautiful. Love is a pure form of art. And it lives on through your words.