I Feel Alone

i'm feeling alone again

there's no one to turn to

i'm feeing alone again

everything around me is a musty wall

i swear i heard voices in the hallway

but they're all faded now

the only voice i can hear clearly

is the one in my head echoing back at me

i feel alone again

the ones that claim they care are

only there when i'm not talking

there's no 'who' to turn to

only the bare walls

why do i feel like the corner is trapping me on all sides

when it is just three?

i feel alone again

that my own voice has abandoned me

there is no more slight echo

just the heavy, overbearing, eerie

silence of nothing

it hurts my ears

aches my mind

crushes my soul

suffocates my body

there are no tears because i cannot even fathom

the energy to wail

but i have cried

and screamed

and wailed many times inside

is that why no one can hear me?

can they not see the pain in my eyes?

the terror in my soul?

the morosity in my mind?

the faux joy in my voice?

i feel alone again

beneath every calm ocean surface

there are violent currents that will not hesitate to sweep

any human life away

beneath every beautiful gas planet there are ugly hurricane

that would shatter your bones if the gravity has not already

the universe is an evil liar.

we are all liars.

and that is why i am feeling alone again

will i be swallowed up by the storm of chaos that has slowly been consuming

me as each 24 hour day goes on?

i feel alone.

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

A tragic poem, but put together very nicely. It has good flow so it was easy to read and pay attention to. We all get that feeling of being alone, like no one will ever be there for us. Just keep in mind that it's always darkest before the dawn, and everyone has a change at happiness no matter how small! Great work :)

[Ma'at]

Thank you X

[guy drori]

Very well done. I could really fell his loneliness. Amazing descrpitions as well...very focused and vivid.

[Lotus Flower]

Such a sad poem and very thought provoking, of you ever feel truly alone you can always talk to me

[Ma'at]

Thank you a lot xx

[Troy Henson]

Rest assured that while you are on WC you are never alone.

Troy

[Ma'at]

Thank you X

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poetry.
"i feel alone again
beneath every calm ocean surface
there are violent currents that will not hesitate to sweep
any human life away"
I could feel the loneliness and chaos forming in heart and in mind. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Ma'at]

Thank you for the review X

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.