fantasy

fantasy

A Poem by Ma'at

i want to go to that place
that place i read about it in the books
those fantasy books
i want to live in that place
that place where i am always enveloped in, reading in my room
that place where magic exists
and handsome princes
and cats who can speak to you through your mind
i want to go to that place
where sexism is fought against
i want to go that place
where kingdoms and monarchs are positive things
i want to go that place
where one can learn sorcery
i want to go that place
that is so much better than here
where one can be happy and do 
what they want to do 
with bravery
and not sadness

© 2015 Ma'at


Author's Note

Ma'at
i've been reading a lot of fantasy lately and I'm getting kinda wistful...

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good a use of punctuation could have made it better however at the same time it helped add this unrealistic feel to the poem, enjoyed the idea of not just escaping but bring the values of fantasy such as courage and bringing them back to our world where we lack such qualities.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thats a good way to put it, i like that. Thank you very much for this



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I second the notion expressed in this poem entirely and wholeheartedly. I love that wishing feeling you've penned in every line: wishing for magic to be real, wishing that the characters on the pages of the book you're reading would move and breathe and live.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I want to go there too. Very cool Daniela. I really liked this one.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ma'at

9 Years Ago

Thank you! and i hope you've been well x
willweb

9 Years Ago

Hanging in there.
Sci-fi and fantasy are my favourite genres! Wouldn't it be incredible? Have you read Inkheart?
When I read that I thought to myself how incredible it would be!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ma'at

9 Years Ago

No i haven't read it, i wanted to a few years ago but i never did. Anything fantasy would be amazing.. read more
i hear you, fantasy is definitely my choice of escape, the honor, the adventure, magic and true undeniable love…. Humanity at its best, but why call it fantasy….. I am sure we can find this in our day to day… though maybe not the talking cats… (to be honest, I think it would freak me out;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ma'at

9 Years Ago

exactly
haha, i suppose so
good a use of punctuation could have made it better however at the same time it helped add this unrealistic feel to the poem, enjoyed the idea of not just escaping but bring the values of fantasy such as courage and bringing them back to our world where we lack such qualities.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thats a good way to put it, i like that. Thank you very much for this

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Added on January 18, 2015
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