thoughts

thoughts

A Poem by Ma'at
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just random s**t that i just thought of

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drowning
but not
there are lots of people around
why am i alone?
just waiting
for something
what is it?
is there a reason
why i made it this far?
i am waiting
but for what?
no friends
yet i have one
it is getting colder
how do i survive?
why does
music help
does anyone actually know?
i can't wait
still dont know 
what is this
why am i here
why does time fly
why do i just stay here
i need someone with me
there are all these people
but no one truly understands
underestimated
i can prove myself
but why dont i?
i could be happy right now
but why am i not?
i dont know
there is nothing more that i know
that i just 
love him
i could go
if only

© 2014 Ma'at


Author's Note

Ma'at
i dont even know...its just my thoughts
i feel sad rn, thats probably why it makes no sense

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You have asked so many questions my friend that I don't know the answer to and the reason is, you hold these answers inside of you. But one I will address...music makes us feel, it allows our emotions to dance to the surface and often, releasing these feelings is the best thing for us. I enjoyed this today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thank you very much xx



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So many questions unanswered. Poetry and music both allow us to feel and manage our thoughts and fears. Being here on the writerscafe has taught me a lot about myself. Keep writing my friend, ask questions and find the answers along the way.

Troy

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thank you for your thoughts x
What's great about poetry, much like music, it doesn't have to make sense. It allows no chance of failure, which any of us are afraid of. I find this powerful because you admit you think it doesn't make sense :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thank you :) x
Asking questions is so good from poets and thinkers alike. Excellent...:)...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thank you :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Welcome...:).................
If you get the answers to those questions, please let me know!
I think music helps because it's good to know that others feel the same as us.
That we're not alone. To understand what our feelings are.
To give us courage.
These questions are tough ones.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

i will, thank you! x
You have asked so many questions my friend that I don't know the answer to and the reason is, you hold these answers inside of you. But one I will address...music makes us feel, it allows our emotions to dance to the surface and often, releasing these feelings is the best thing for us. I enjoyed this today.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

9 Years Ago

thank you very much xx
that was really good, i really liked it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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