trust

trust

A Poem by Ma'at

trust
is something that should be earned
once it is lost it is gone
but don't you think
that no matter what happens
you should always trust someone
it hurts
it really hurts
after it is lost long ago but never returned
it ruins everything really
and lowers self-esteem
i miss having trust
and i hope that one day it'll be returned
because i feel lost without trust

© 2014 Ma'at


Author's Note

Ma'at
sorry...it isnt my best

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Trust is always a big deal in life with relationships in life. Even with family, trust can easily be lost. But sometimes it can be regained slowly. A very truthful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

10 Years Ago

thank you xx
Trust should be earned absolutely but you should always give people a chance to earn it. :!
Nice job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

10 Years Ago

thank you!
When trust is lost, there really isn't anything left. I can feel the emptiness in your words.
Well done
:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

10 Years Ago

thank you :)
Such honest and true words spoken here. This was a heart felt plea from someone hurt by distrust. The longing for this repair is deep.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

10 Years Ago

that's very true...thank you so much :)
It is still a very good poem, 100 points far as I'm concerened...anything from the heart always is. - ZERO

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ma'at

10 Years Ago

oh thank you!

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