I Drew Things

 drew things on my arms
I drew my hate
my despair
my misery
I drew the cold
the snow
and the ice
I drew my love
warmth
happiness
I drew the world
the planets
and the universe
I drew everything there has to be
for life to exist
I drew the things
that keep my heart beating
the words
that I follow
the words
that I’ve promised to support
the words
that guide me through tough times
the words
that I Iisten to when I’m sad
and my head is down
the words
that keep me alive today
I drew the words
that saved my life

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

An interesting piece, GS, presented in a very striking format. Tattoos seem to be the rage nowadays - a way to tell the world who you are and what you think. Do you have some of those? Write on.

[Ma'at]

no i don't, i'm too young. but i write on myself a lot, and plan on getting tattoos later. thank you :)

[Sunny]

Wow! this is so unique! it is kind of i don't know mysterious and different. :)
you're a very good writer

[Ma'at]

thank you!! :)

[Matching Socks]

Wow! This one is so great.
I love it. Such a great flow, so unique, great message, so many good things about this.
You are like a hidden gem!

[Ma'at]

aww that's so sweet. thank you. i'm new to this site, but i've been writing for a while :)

[Matching Socks]

I'm new too, I just joined beginning of the month. :)
We're both noobs.

[Ma'at]

i joined last month but i was inactive for a while, haha. yay noobs.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Wow. Brilliant and excellent piece. I love the style and it flowed so well :)

[Ma'at]

thank you for your kind words, i'm glad you liked it :)

[Sami Khalil]

I like your style a lot. Thank you for sharing your gems...:)...................
In my library...:).........................

[Ma'at]

thank you for the kind review :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the idea of drawing words...and perhaps we can write pictures with them...

but our words are our savior, they help us through the toughest times...don't know what i would have done without my writing.

[Ma'at]

yes they do, words from others are also very important to me, as well as my own. writing is something very important.