Senses

I see his bring-me-to-my-knees smile and his thin but strong body. I see his dark hair and skin but bright eyes. All in all he is beautiful to see.

I hear his soft but commanding voice. I hear his heartbeat a little extra hard when I put my head on his chest. I hear is breathing change just slightly when he holds me. All in all he is beautiful to listen to.

I smell his skin every time he holds me. I smell the scent of his vapor that he spends his days inhaling. I smell his sweet breath every time I lean in to kiss him. All in all he is beautiful to smell.

I taste his soft lips. I taste his cheek and his hands when I ever I give him a soft kiss to tell him I love his without words. All in all he’s beautiful to taste.

I feel his touch just about everyday but never tired of it. I feel his strong arms as they hold me tight through the night. I feel his sex and his tears. I feel all the love he has inside. I feel the love he creates in me. All in all he’s beautiful to feel.

Reviews

[softlyfall]

Would you be interested in an edit?
Straight off, there IS no expression "all and all"
It is All IN all
would you like some help with this?

[EmyBow]

Funny part is I didn't notice I did that until you pointed it out! Definitely going to fix that! Thank you!