Lost

Am I alone, just me,
All these voices, they can see me.
Pulled in so many directions, I'm so mixed up,
I scream, I cry, enough, stop.

Take your pills dear, it will help,
My heart wills me, but my head starts to melt.
I'm in a blur now, can anyone hear me?
I can't live like this, really!

Lost and drowning, in my own thoughts,
I'm in a whirlwind, my stomachs in knots.
It's so dark and bleak here, my mere existence,
I just want to feel nothing, silence.

I could just end it now, who would notice,
A jabbering nutcase, a suffering head case.
Sweating, panting, eyes filled with tears,
All that remains is a headstone, for a girl of just twenty years.

Reviews

[Angeldust-magic]

I'm in a blur now, can anyone hear me?
I can't live like this, really!

This line could of been better but I really like the overall poem.

[Lavery the Librettist]

thanx for ur feedback

[creativequill]

this was a successful peace, the rapid fall into insanity, you're right there with her, great job

[Lavery the Librettist]

thank you :)

[creativequill]

Welcome

[Dearantlers]

Ahh, that's sad. Poor girl. I was not expecting the ending to go where it did, but I liked it. I think this is a great poem!

[Lavery the Librettist]

thank you :)