Tearing away

Tearing away

A Poem by EmpressPoetess

 

My goodness!

I'm scratching my head

just trying to figure you out

why is it when we're together

you just want to scream and shout?

nothing I do seems to appease you

I've got this feeling that you want out

maybe, just maybe I no longer please you

maybe I'm no longer what you're looking for

give me one last kiss before I walk out the door.

© 2010 EmpressPoetess


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Very touching poem with a lot of emotion in ti. Really loved the last two lines. Thanks for sharing

Posted 14 Years Ago


A poem that well expresses the bewilderment of emotional abuse and the desire, despite all, for one last kiss... Powerful and poignant

Posted 14 Years Ago



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EmpressPoetess
EmpressPoetess

Dallas, TX



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A single mom of 4 adult kids. I love to write, mostly romance poetry, but I do dabble in different areas of poetry. I just write what I feel about life. I also write short stories. I live In Dalla.. more..

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