You know I would

Entered in the Rhyme Time contest

 

If I could
You know I would
Sail across the astral plain
Align the stars to spell your name

If I could
You know I would
Sing you a song of praise
Give you sweet music all your days

If I could
ou know I would
Dance with you on the moon
Whisper sweet nothings till you swoon

If I could
You know I would
Capture the colors of a summer sunrise
And make them like the colors of your eyes

If I could
I really would
Hold you forever in my arms
Shelter you from all the world’s harms

Alas, these are the whims of a foolish girl
Who dreams of giving you the world
You know I would
If I could.
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Reviews

[Neko Green]

This has beautiful cadence, and I love the rhythm and sweet repetition of the lines. Lovely. ^ ^

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write alot.
I thought this was a very well written write.