Rejection's reflection

 

I dare to face rejections chill

While yearning for your gentleness

I knock but echoes answer still

 While pleading for your forgiveness

My passion’s bent to see once more

Him that my heart is panting for

From rejection I shield my face

And turn away in jilted grace

 

Remember love, its tender parts

When love in us took flight

Should pain be master of our hearts?

And shield love from our sight?

Reviews

[deeps]

This is a very well written and expressive write here. I can feel your emotions you have penned out here.

[Jibey]

This one works really well, with its gentle flow of thoughts, even though the rhythm gets a bit bumpy - maybe intentionally. I like the structure and the tenderness... and you chose a beautiful image to enhance the words... *smiles*

[Hello, Goodbye]

Reflective, indeed. This poem ponders very well, reaching out and making us think.

[kishie]

awesome!!!!