Memory streams

Close my lips forever, if I can't whisper your name
I shall live in silence, never again to proclaim
Let darkness seal me away from dreams
I shall sleep in an empty void, so it seems

Sun rays fill my heart when I see your smiling face
Your fingers against mine makes my heart race
I yearn for the magic of your kiss
When I kiss you I know I'll taste bliss,

I love the touch of your breath at my ear
In your arms, life becomes crystal clear
Lets run carefree through fields on bare feet
Where dew kissed flowers are ever so sweet

Let's soar the skies on the wings of a dove
Let's laugh and cry as we pursue everlasting love
I don't ever want to lose these memory streams
I shall live forever, if I live in your dreams

I love the touch of your breath at my ear
In your arms, life becomes crystal clear
Lets run carefree through fields on bare feet
Where dew kissed flowers are ever so sweet


 

Reviews

[Jibey]

Intensely romantic, this poem holds our attention with its tight form and strong feelings, conveyed through images of touch, of fields and dew-kissed flowers... Sweet indeed

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Really such a brilliant display of intense passion...

Close my lips forever, if I can't whisper your name
I shall live in silence, never again to proclaim
Let darkness seal me away from dreams
I shall sleep in an empty void, so it seems

This is like a Romeo and Juliet kinda feel to it... a truly wonderful piece of writing.