If you move I'll fall

Beautiful, is what you are to me
loving you is all the pleasure I need
our love grows sweeter  with each day
united in our quest to remain this way

your strength is my shelter from the rain
your wisdom, my comfort from all pain
 your love is my protective wall
stand with me,  for, if you ever move,I'll fall

Powerful, is what your love is to me
with you, I'm not afraid to face tomorow
you fill my life with joy,
there is no room for sorrow

you are my shining beacon of light
that guides me through life's stormy night
You see all my weaknesses
you fix them all, so selflessly
with you by my side,  I can stand tall

but, if you ever move, I'll fall
Loving you makes me what I am
without you, I'm nothing at all
so please stand by me
without you, I will surely fall.

 

Reviews

[deeps]

Such emotion, i can feel this from your heart.
Heartfelt write. Well written and expressed.

[Constance L. Hartwell]

what a beautifully written poem. I remember when I used to feel this way... kudos