Subconscious dreams

Subconscious dreams

A Poem by EmpressPoetess
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You can gleam your own meaning from this one.

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Mesmerizing visions abound

by shrouds in blackness

flashing in reason and cause


vivid subconscious thoughts

quietly spread within

watering arid emotions

releasing designs of fierce rage


breathless wisps, prickling heat

coldness seeps, spin inside

purple mist, blue haze, white light

ticking, beating, pounding

meta morphing pulses, liquid


dreams go cold and vanish

awakening conscious reason

overshadowing blind focus.


the watcher sees what lies beneath

fools run towards what waits ahead

blinded by the light of covetousness.

 

© 2011 EmpressPoetess


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This is quite the peculiar piece, very nice write though.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


Very mesmerizing and mysterious... not sure myself what it is about but I was very intrigued.

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Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it's just a lovely as you are! x00x0 it was in you, you got it out!, that's what happped! x0x0x
Just cool as the breeze my friend! x0

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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EmpressPoetess
EmpressPoetess

Dallas, TX



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A single mom of 4 adult kids. I love to write, mostly romance poetry, but I do dabble in different areas of poetry. I just write what I feel about life. I also write short stories. I live In Dalla.. more..

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