An account of tears

Do we really take responsibility for the pain we cause others? How would you do it?

Your smile is gone

it used to brighten my day

and your musical voice

is no longer light and gay

you cired sad tears

your world fell apart

I know loving me is not easy

I feel your despair in my heart

I know I have caused you pain

and for your unhappiness

I will take the blame

I'll except the full amount

so charge your tears

to my account.

Reviews

[BLACKCRUSH]

When you said : " And your musical voice no longer light and gay". I picture a person that would sing to you every morning or hum there favorite songs in the shower , it would bring a smile to your face.This is why I find this poem so sad because all of that is taken away.The writer takes complete blame for causing the person pain and it makes your heart ache for her. I think this was a wonderful write.

[S. Michael Long]

i absolutely despised this poem until i read the last two stanzas, once again, never judge a book by its cover.. .(i wont go into semantics) its a nice write! -s

[Voice]

Wow, this is really good I like this poem a lot. I can relate sometimes it's hard when you know you have hurt someone you care for. This is a great poem and it's going on my read list�

Voice

[just is]

I'll except the full amount
so charge your tears
to my account.

i like these lines here, such a sad write here.