Outstretched

Rolling over sideways and chasing your tail to catch her
Outsmarted overtime at the drop of a dime
I must commit a crime to keep her fine
In line with Calvin Cline
Wine and dine each and every night of mine
As long as I defy the most natural who say, "oneness is all today"
A total pull toward her most inward shall
Hand knit by over all her time spent
Overall giving her a smell unlike any other
New, old, and in search of a more attractive manner to have her
Kneeling in conflict to die for her

Author's Note

Just writing at night...as it is sometimes. Nothing more. :)



Enjoy!

Reviews

Spinning turntables, music, dancing girls, love, freedom, I am so proud of you, still try to catch the tail. Even though it may stink of your own s**t.
Beautiful poetry, as always. We are unique, and it will ever right the first time with our buisiness plan. But now I turn the circle of life, and so will you. Absolutely delicious. I love you forever soul. Nobody can replace you. If you're a real soul, people can learn from you. You write abstract as their loss is to fullfilled. As always, amazing insight, clear thoughts, and roots. yeah luv, circles are hard to leave...

E.L.

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A vibrant picture of raw :)

[Cassie Fraga]

YOU ROCKED IT!!! the free flow in verse is what I appreciate... RAW and CLEVER... never a let down coming to visit your writes, you AMAZE ME every time!! yes I am jammin in my chair right now, def. enjoyed this whole piece!!

[MOON]

Lovely write speaks of materialism and lenghts people go to own things . Some people just high maintenance.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is intriguing...the night can bring such thought provoking writes. For the reader, the "her" can be in reference to many things, a car perhaps? (only my perception) I like the rhythmic flow, very smooth. Nice work!

[Cole Hayley]

I like it , it has a very nice flow to it! Check out some of my stuff! :)