Life Has Many Looks

Life Has Many Looks

A Poem by Empirik

The touch of a kitties fur you've known since birth
How would it feel to unearth that
To force a women to tell her secrets
Listening to beautiful depressive piano
It is not fair to make her put down her hair
Real life has many looks
What matters is her heart

© 2012 Empirik


Author's Note

Empirik
Yes, it is true. The music to the women who make you, you.



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Gorgeous!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely! Beautiful and you speak the truth! =) Great job! I love this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Real Life Has Many Looks, sorry, I love to name poems......oh yes it does. Exquisite.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, every line so well placed the last three a great tribute.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Maybe it's just me, but anytime "kittens" get paired with "women", it always has undertones of sexual innuendo, esp when coupled with "unearth" (nice inner rhyme with "birth").

Like the last two lines.

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Now THAT, is the sweetest, prettiest, loveliest, thing I have ever read. "What matters is her heart", I am glad there is a guy out there that thinks so. Nicely done, my friend. This made me smile and I thank you for it:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gosh, I love that song, have a quit similar one on my about me.... ;)
Lovely! ♫

The poem is fantastic,
Your words are illuminating, the force of a woman.
In your ocular and you drawed her with an sharp eye.

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 3, 2012
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Empirik

Molalla, OR



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