Cognitive Dissonace

Cognitive Dissonace

A Poem by Empirik

An attractiveness growing stronger every day
Is so far away in two hearts lost in the hay, yet they still fall together today
The feeling of being on the other side of Earth's bail
Also knowing he is right there to lift that veil
Assurance in the merger of thought and emotion
Not telling every one the meaning of life
It is true to live every minuet with a heart-stopping look
When it comes to you and builds in front of you

Do you stop everything you do

Momentary miracles made real merely by surreal movements
In two equally attractive souls
A decision has to be developed
Intellectual tension
A psychological mission to positively promote desire
No matter how high the fire
Extinguishing the competition for hire
Finding ways to increase lyrical sprier

The difference is a huge amount of space
This area is full of their grace
Setting a miraculous pace towards one another's face
That has never been seen by the hands, or timed by the mouth
Coming to be said each and every night in bed
Tucking her in and wishing it wasn't always in his head

© 2012 Empirik


Author's Note

Empirik
Meant to be a positive approach to this psychological theory



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This has such a lovely lyrical feel to it, my mouth easily and quite naturally adjusted to the pace as I read it aloud the second time around. My favourite out of the plethora of good lines was:
'Momentary miracles made real merely by surreal movements'.
I felt a powerful tension in the beginning and I was glad to see you resolve it in the end, because the emotional turn made for a very sweet after-taste (though the tension you relayed was very good as well).

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This has such a lovely lyrical feel to it, my mouth easily and quite naturally adjusted to the pace as I read it aloud the second time around. My favourite out of the plethora of good lines was:
'Momentary miracles made real merely by surreal movements'.
I felt a powerful tension in the beginning and I was glad to see you resolve it in the end, because the emotional turn made for a very sweet after-taste (though the tension you relayed was very good as well).

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oooh how rich did you told this. And I get the ending now, wonderous, and paranormal. Sometimes in life the haunted is just a dream in life itself, and some uncontrolable desire and all around that are temptations, could be just be made for your afterlife. If you're to greedy. Karma is always around and watching, You made it alive, by telling lost in the hay, yet they still fall together today. That's the exact clue. This is a wonderful expressed struggle of feelings, I can relate to, but also I shall relativate it more, I think, but I must admit I love this raw emotion. And honesty, within you. It shall bring you finally at the right place of destiny. Where the two of love can breathe, and the heavy burden can fall from the shoulders, (literally). Excellent art here. Very exquisite.

E.L. xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Empirik

Molalla, OR



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