A Chambered Mind

Knots nicely tied behind a chambered mind
Buoyantly expressing passion through the eyes
Traveling toward terrific thought
Walking down a pebble street at midnight
Stopping in the epiphany of where thy should be, and with whom

Realizing the denial, living in fright or unable to fight
Being immortal while beside her
Eliminating all fear of death and despise
Creatively locked in thought-provoking architecture
Building a real definition of love

Where art was drama and poetry was conversation
More than an idea or word of no definition
Men battling in a time when all needed was that one true matching women
Killing all ego and untying all the knots in my locks
Freeing my mind to bind to her in a heart-stopping approach

Risking the present to change the future

Author's Note

Just a loving thought wrapped up in my own accord.



Thank You! X

Reviews

Amazing, "Walking down a pebble street at midnight" where the pebble's glance and are reflected by the moonlight... the street on your right eye, behind you some stairs of a church and a huge time clock. (a love building?) This is a wonderful vision, at where you will go that night, within your words. Very inspiring and an artistic write, as time, and time areas are haunting the quil, and words are love to find.... Great stuff soul!

[MOON]

There is a sadness to this write, every word carefully chosen. Love the line where art was drama and poetry conversation . Your last line too risking the present to change the future insightful.

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Gorgeous!

[Alexandria Reece]

I love how you brought it back to the knots in the end and resolved it! The pace makes it a very enjoyable read and I can feel the emotions set between every line. There is an almost bleak undertone, which keeps the reader alert and reading onward.. I do hope the future turns out favourably for you. Also, this reminds me a bit of the street scenes in Stevenson's 'Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde' with an added element of love. Splendid!