Central Confusion

Living in a world of magic and lecture
Roaming around illusive architecture
Forced to bunk with thieves and swine
The same few who ate my food and drank my wine

In a realm of people who only have one power
Feeling like summer camp in a lone tower
All grouped together by gang or flower
Living there to pass each and every hour

Some could fly
Some had a voice
Some were made to fight
Some would stop time or dance

Few had the knowledge to build labyrinths
As I cast my eyes upon people I get the truth
Alone not knowing where I was or if there was anyone else like me
Coming to a place where she needed my help

Blue in all the dynamic pleasure
Midnight tight jumpsuit and cape allure
Vibrant azul lips incredibly pure
She was stuck for sure

Caught beneath a fallen rock
In a fleeting glance as my eyes lock
I feel this supreme significant knock
Showing me the truth as no one could flock

I help her out and we fly above
Landing at the foot of her brigade
Man standing forth to take my place
As I step aside the General appoints me as her partner

Shocked, overwhelmed, stunned and excited
I grabbed onto the dark threads and held her tight
We jumped off the ice so high loosing my stomach
In combat for something I didn't understand

Battling to keep her safe and not die
As I never knew by saving her that she could fly
Thus she saw I would not be told a lie
So we flew and became so incredibly high

I am faced with a kid who can stop time
Glowing in my direction I see his truth
He's trapped by the ogle I was given
Putting an end to the trouble I was liven

Entering a lottery of chance
All in order to save the last dance
With the end approaching I was the last stance
As the final test came I failed to pass the lance

Now, being challenged
I fought hard
Neck-n-Neck
Back-to-Back

A sudden articulate lack
Exploding like a truck named "Mack"
Killing all but the few I told of my hack
Re-uniting with everybody except Jack

I still feel alone with nobody to share my eyes
Until altogether searching upon her surprise
Surrounded by destructive illusions falling all around
I turned my frown upside down and swept her blue off the ground

Author's Note

Yes, a down tempo theme to accompany this dream...



I love this girl! X

Reviews

Mixed martial arts, can be so differently blown your mind away as the true need of the moment, captures, the movement... it's a reflection of the inner soul mirrored out to the enemy. Karma shall speak in highly voice always. The force is maybe not relevant to reflect as you assumed, but the healing powers, could bring more than you think....
This was a haunting elusive beautiful dream, yes. Full of blue, even the mouth, as it should be meaning the inner cold, and freezing personality... and light, but you did not won the fight...
As you have to learn, to accept all what comes in life unannounced, to embrace fully what could have been missed.... ;) Such a honest, lovely write, hats off to you, again, poignant, Empirik, and Azul as only Natalia brings us the mood. Thanks Soul! xo

[MOON]

Lovely , the way you told a short story in a poem.

[Cassie Fraga]

COOOOOOOOOOOOOL!!! you tell a very well poetic story!!! that was an awesome read with its twists and turns!! BRAVO!! BRAVO!! **throws roses at the screen** your words play and imagery is what stands out the most to me in this piece!! I love to read the imagination come to life here!! AWESOMENESS AT ITS BEST!!

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golly..a roller coaster of imagery..you rhymed hard and fast..break neck speed and true deliverance..talent shines through..

[Lily Mae]

I felt as if I was inside an action movie.. the way you describe it so perfectly.. You take the lottery of chance and risk to make it real.. or at least allow it to be whatever it is to bloom.. Sweeping her and the blue..the truth.. off the ground..sigh.. this is a beauty..xo