A Being Suggested

A Being Suggested

A Poem by Empirik

A slang term for smooth skin
A young complexion appearance
A vigor for life and not afraid of death
A coming in to what is woven to you
A knowledge of something greater
A teacher you remember
A time before December
A look upon a member of the opposite sex
A position entering a bar named, "The Lex"
A hesitation with...
A man named Lex
A question for you
A now, what do you do
A laugh for free and "Hi" to be

© 2012 Empirik


Author's Note

Empirik
Just a thought upon a gaze

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This is such a thought I have many of those too.... moment to moment, in a second, during a minute, I must admit, I didn't get the last half fully but... the first half is brilliantly clear. I love the structure, and the "A" in front, I see a bounch of mixed feelings through metaphors, hidden in the desert, digged in sand..... love to grave by the way, before december hmmm.... makes me think, as you know why ;) clever. Anyhow, it's a wonderful rambling of poetry in the dark occult night, I love to catch! thanks my soul!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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The second half is simply a meeting for the first time. The first half is an emotional roller coaster of anticipation for the meeting at first sight, and yes it contains fear as well as confidence. Thank you for both those wonderful reviews. Always enjoy hearing other people's thoughts, relations, or considerations. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a thought I have many of those too.... moment to moment, in a second, during a minute, I must admit, I didn't get the last half fully but... the first half is brilliantly clear. I love the structure, and the "A" in front, I see a bounch of mixed feelings through metaphors, hidden in the desert, digged in sand..... love to grave by the way, before december hmmm.... makes me think, as you know why ;) clever. Anyhow, it's a wonderful rambling of poetry in the dark occult night, I love to catch! thanks my soul!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like repeating poems like this and have written a few of my own, they are always a challenge but can hold true meaning :D i like yours, the title fits it very well

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Empirik
Empirik

Molalla, OR



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