Automatic Yes

In a time tonight about to write a light perspective
from inside the bright fiery cells of spirit might
Seeing past the stars of fright and feeling movement so tight
As keen as a wild animal born into a life with simple function
The way a man looks to a women with seduction
No words spoke, yet everything was heard in truth
Through eyes peering at mouth
Traveling along the track as a train passes bellowing presence
Starved for love
The sound of a bell towering the scape land around
Sweating bullets exploding from a gun
Just beginning to run and fight to touch love right
As the Moon beams silver on the rim of face
Calling out across the dense grace
Echoing back immediately from the base abound
Where we stand circling around and never touching the ground
For the will to speak from the heart and taste the pulsing metallic beat
of liquid vibration trapped in a drum of unbreakable substance
Knocking from deep inside
A foreign body holds the key to opening deaf's roll
Tearing flesh
Breaking bones
Spilling blood
All causing a gigantic thud felt beneath everyone's feet,
but altered only a two through the beautiful bass tone
Rhythmically rhyming far-off distances
Admitting that instance
The power of love
Living day-to-day for that one final pray to be answered
That day when intuition join two in great position
Where all it took for them to listen
As the sun set with a green flash containing the affirming ring
To that which nothing else matters
Following the curve of the Earth as fantasy
Feeling everlasting unity
Overwhelming the Moon's howls
Crop-circling the land and craters at hand
Land beneath water passing notes through a band and rushing roughly riveting rock
To which it is known by all that great gesture grinds away reality to form another world
Now, confidently calming collected connection in response
Eliminating city and forming a farm where love grass grows
These two know when where will be rapping in the night
Tapping on the sun inside eyes yelling whispers of true adventure
With what is done as the ink sinks to the depths of soul's paper and is read with
blinding fury clearing the clouds in brain and never again going down the drain
Holding sight of what will be the true song beautiful and free

Author's Note

Thank You

Reviews

Oh Andrew, this is far way your best~ What a sparkling ramble, of poetic lines... Rich vivid, and build up perfectly. I must read it five times, to get every little detail fully in me, and I will reread it a thousand times. Because, you have the talent, to renew in the beauty of your ink each time differently with new perspectives, the wisdom you speak gives goosebumps in positivism. This is amazing work, could be published right away!!! Love it! 100/100!!!

[AtticusBlack]

Your writing style is brilliant, not come across someone who writes this effortlessly for a while, the way it's all put together works. It just seems written as you've thought it.

[Empirik]

Thank you Eli! You got it as you always do. This is my deepest write. As time goes on my words get more and more personal as...