Day Dreaming

A dim light illuminating a cheek
Orthodox rose resembling a peach
Color correct and slightly fuzzy
irresistible to the nose
Standing erect
The sound of hardwood cracking under feet
Moving toward a risk
Backed by a song singing everything the tongue cannot
Plumb in the mist wondering
Should I, or should I not
Softly touch her grace before me and bind the great book bestowed upon us
Blowing of the dust
Coughing and waving our hands…about to touch
Then stopping our eyes centimeters apart
Top lip reaching for the bottom
To wear is right there
Looking up
Finding a pupil to meet
Two souls in heat
Shaded by the sun and sweating beneath the shelter in the stones
Deep in time and pressure forming our true identity
Strength unmatched
Beauty attached
Door unlatched
A nudge
Falling forward
Lips collide
A deep breath
Squeezing so tight light bursts from loins
Coins fall to the floor
As our dreams are ever more
 

Author's Note

Day Dreaming...



Thank You!

Reviews

Our dreams are ever more yes, the are... such a heartfelt piece, of love, and light, and metaphors, dancing across the universe I couldn't breathe no more... This is stunning. you wave your words oldfashioned in pure vanity throught the page, of love... to catched up by the best, and felt by the ones who feel.... i love this, you're an artist in heart and soul..... please keep amazing your Dutchie! xo

[Andrea]

This is incredible. I love you imagery and your word choices are absolutely dreamy. well done!

[Leslie Philibert]

This is a good poem,especially like the very visual last lines, lots of tempo as well as intelligent
imagery.Looking forward to reading more.