Free Will

Free Will

A Poem by Empirik

Following a path of a cracked road
Stones placed in areas to trip on
Foliage in time with movement

Dilated blindness

The way vision become when something surprising happens

Walking intentions toward a-new perspective

Helpful

Anxious

Aware

A glowing Glow-worm inching across a wet leaf
Arriving at a place chosen
Deciding to stay for its plenty

Wondering if it's possible to…change

The path widens
Rocks disappear
The feeling comes that an escort is here

Big, beautiful, and able to fly

© 2012 Empirik


Author's Note

Empirik
Perception, attitude and ability are everything



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Here I feel the true way to happiness and freedom to test, even more, with all the contradictions and anxieties that entails. The opposite end, made ​​me think that nothing can be so important, as something you already had. Otherwise you make the reader and (maybe yourself) curious for more, more challenges, more trials, more everything. This is a miracle that manner of expression, which I love in your poetry. Makes people think, you do that with your mind, and the ink out of the quill did the rest... You're inspiring.

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beautiful I love poetry that makes you think and this made me think nice flow great imagery and it says so much more than is written makes me want to read all your stuff so be expecting more reviews haha

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Here I feel the true way to happiness and freedom to test, even more, with all the contradictions and anxieties that entails. The opposite end, made ​​me think that nothing can be so important, as something you already had. Otherwise you make the reader and (maybe yourself) curious for more, more challenges, more trials, more everything. This is a miracle that manner of expression, which I love in your poetry. Makes people think, you do that with your mind, and the ink out of the quill did the rest... You're inspiring.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Empirik
Empirik

Molalla, OR



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I live the dream. Giving back to art as my breath. Exploring Creative Mechanics with every heartbeat. I love to...Never Stop Learning. P.S. All my images are 100% Empirik Designs property more..

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