Natural Selection

Natural Selection

A Poem by Empirik

As we begin to hike
Song birds feed on the fresh seed
It's early summer
The morning ripe with sweetness
An old loved hand held for the first time
The ground is flat and dry
Sword fern all around
For miles and miles the wind weaves and withers through a forest of knowledge
Knowing who we are and what it requires to continue together
One foot in front of the other
Resting further beside old growth
Natures beauty
Decomposing fallen trees
Stability in the past
Seeing two squirrels a-like
Mind coming together with the river
descending beauty
Fast
Powerful
Elegant
Freely flowing forward falling together bound by Earth
Majestic
Merry making our way across canvas bodies in seek of further exploration
Hot sun
Sweat sweetly swerving upon our faces
Eyes locked on the stride
Decided to be
A place where two can feel free and share face
One wearing lace
The other in bare grace
Reaching the car fixed with freedom and mated for eternity
 

© 2012 Empirik


Author's Note

Empirik
Enjoy when finished reading to further soak it all in.

Thank you!


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Wow, this is amazing! Truly stunning, this hike has all the two beloved persons had, have, and truly need. Beautiful metaphors, artistic shots taken by your vivid mind the ending is so good! Perfect!! I want to jump into this poetic story, and never come out of the screen anymore forever locked in it's beauty.... :) Thank you for sharing!

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Amazing

For miles and miles
the wind weaves
and withers through
a forest of knowledge
Knowing who we are
and what it requires
to continue together
One foot in front of the other

a stand out stanza it could even stand on its own

100/100



Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, this is amazing! Truly stunning, this hike has all the two beloved persons had, have, and truly need. Beautiful metaphors, artistic shots taken by your vivid mind the ending is so good! Perfect!! I want to jump into this poetic story, and never come out of the screen anymore forever locked in it's beauty.... :) Thank you for sharing!

E.L.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 21, 2012
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Empirik
Empirik

Molalla, OR



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