From up above to down below They remain in suspended form as a crow flies Unchained by emotion and drawn together like syntax Forever supported from the initial instance of risky communication
Across the seas Entering the forest's chest while falling through the sky Landing on heaven's door Together unbreakable
Unstoppable wrath is no match Nor mercy is able to discourage The perfect from maintaining A full heart
Convergence co-aligned inside Warming material Hugging across distances Beyond boundaries or reach
Yet touched to the core Sore from exercise and exhausted mind Taking time to recharge, give back and gain strength As time progresses
Forward we move Parallel in unison United in this presence or place Made real by just the two of us
Warmed by a sun which we created as if the dream is everyday…Immortal.
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Wow, I found this one very deep, and nice my dear friend. Your words are a bliss to read....
I get here a very "Greek" feeling, as I prefer, through these words, the Romantic in you, and the Analytical in you, merge like Zeus's himself, and the powers he is capable off. Very raw, and honest, very heartfelt, and true, true-er can't be... for it's this beautiful, in the way it is...
" Forward we move
Parallel in unison
United in this presence or place
Made real by just the two of us"
I love your perfect ambiguity too, in each
and every artistic piece, for it makes you unique,
And it makes us to ponder, which I love...
You're such a true observer, in all... can't say it enough.
Your lines are like the gossamer, ink on perkament here.
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11 Years Ago
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Wow, I found this one very deep, and nice my dear friend. Your words are a bliss to read....
I get here a very "Greek" feeling, as I prefer, through these words, the Romantic in you, and the Analytical in you, merge like Zeus's himself, and the powers he is capable off. Very raw, and honest, very heartfelt, and true, true-er can't be... for it's this beautiful, in the way it is...
" Forward we move
Parallel in unison
United in this presence or place
Made real by just the two of us"
I love your perfect ambiguity too, in each
and every artistic piece, for it makes you unique,
And it makes us to ponder, which I love...
You're such a true observer, in all... can't say it enough.
Your lines are like the gossamer, ink on perkament here.
Fantastic... I shall come over to read this more more and more... thank you.
I'm so happy to see you back on here. :D
Thank you so much!!! Elisa, you are the best! Glad to be here too. I have missed my quill and more.... read moreThank you so much!!! Elisa, you are the best! Glad to be here too. I have missed my quill and more...! More yo come I have inside. To be matched with all of us who write. Lots a love. X
11 Years Ago
Ain't it great? ah, love these words....!!! yep! we should be all together, as the old times! Can't .. read moreAin't it great? ah, love these words....!!! yep! we should be all together, as the old times! Can't wait for your new pieces, truly, you inspire me so much too! Take care love and hugs X :)
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