Dawnesque Light

Standing in the shower atop a dark hall that extends forever

          Water filling the ears

Heightened intent to understand the visual

          Hearing a distant Organ playing through broken pipes

Standing on tipi toes

           Leaning forward to peer past presence stance

At a glance, she appeared lightened beyond the black

           Stacked, pitch and unable to clarify the ability

She has to defy regular rules lived by

           Clairvoyant in fuzzy silhouette tendency

Hovering in my central lobe

           Oscillating a strobe standstill beneath my feet

Encrypting sensation

           Never seen before

Thought before spoken voice

           Saving the salvic moistful gesture for after the study

Inexplicable question escaped

           Infinite reflections across mirrored plains

Seeing myself in her saying within me

           "Look inside"

Finding it not so far to beach-side

          Psychology reaching in and pulling out thin lines written in white dyes

Blending in Obsidian cries of cognitive reprise

         Opening eyes to another days surprise

Realizing she is inside helping me define the highs, thus lows go away with wind

         Moving my hand with a grin

Satisfied writing

         As-if I was still there

Cleaning off the past

Author's Note

This actually happened...and I studied it, finished my shower and wrote. I know the last few posts have been a little more real-time/experimental, this one was tightly structured to reflect the startling and breathtaking subtle cognitive reproach to...closing my eyes in the shower after a twenty two mile, three day backpacking trip in the Mt. Jefferson Wilderness. This is only a taste of the images from that experience.



Thank You!!! X

P.S. This tunes is also special to me and would raise the hairs on my neck if I was def.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Those moments are captured perfectly. I just had one of those experiences and I just posted a piece about it. The moment of writing it is just an excellent feeling. I think you captured that feeling well here. This reminds me of a trip I took to Theodore Roosevelt National Park last year and saw the Painted Canyon overlook. Quite the sight and thanks for the memory.

[MOON]

Lovely descriptive almost like soul cleansing a shower after a beautiful hike the beautiful memory.

[Empirik]

Hun,

I know you, and only you can have these experiences,
The inside of yourself translated into what each experiment may mean
What you have studied, is a whimsical but beautiful spirit
"You", I do not know exactly who you meant by this poem,
And who entered so deeply but that certainly makes it a jewel
of mystery for the reader. I am impressed with your abstract and correct math
translation of the still very important things you outlined awfully good.
That is not an easy task, but you can.
I enjoyed this loving, but ghostly sensation
And experience in your mind, if I was there.
Excellent work.

E.L. X

[Empirik]

Thank you so much! It was exactly that an overwhelming, eerie and centered moment in time. X :)

I felt it, and I remembered when you called me after... when you where home. And went for the shower. Goosebumps! stunning.... YOU

[Empirik]

Yes, I did after that one, this just happened last weekend, and i was in my old hippie friends dirty shower. I had to close my eyes, yet i was so dirty i blended in. Then the vision came, so i studied it and took it sll in so that after i got dressed i could write about ir clearly. I have more to post from this trip because I mostly hiked and camped alone. You are the best! XXX :)

That is wonderful, to have a past-presence deja-vu. Only can happen by very photographic memories ;) so know for sure you have them :P (always did already) Being alone, brings, brighten visions.... I can talk with you. :) you're better xxx

[Empirik]

Indeed you can...forever.

*smiling*knowing*silently*I*just*talk*with*you*every*day*...

[Empirik]

*mmmmmmhmmmm* "My Girl"

[Empirik]

:)

*smiling* X