After He got Off Work

The smell of street cart barbecue on the right corner of the front door bar entrance.
Asking questions got a look of hindrance, pushing for a taste of "My Daddy's" sauce. Robust red riveting relation to vinegar. Slightly salted and spiced in a medium fashion. Overall sensing satisfaction.

In bliss smoking Djarum duly black detecting random observation of local interaction inclining interesting enjoyment just getting off work. He smiled as if the ocean parted, but not at me at his replacement and joining friends.

Taking it in by ear
Turning to reveal

He's happier than a clam in a brown dress loosing all apparent stress. I felt like less and hungry for the best, however they did not quite pass the test.

Author's Note

Actual experience! It only lasted a short while as this flew out of me in eight minuets.

Reviews

[Empirik]

Perfect observation and write in eight minutes, some review me and think I had days of work on a poem, when mostly I write so quickly it's out on paper within 10/15 minutes... Then the spelling check lol. (For me) some writes cost me two till 5 days, it depends, I think every writer should have plenty of each, to capture an honest moment, you know when you make photos, you can lighten, macro, all, but some shots are just having needed your keen eye and speed, like catching a bee on lavender. :) you just did that with this write oculair beauty of a man! :) X

[Empirik]

Yesssss!!!to everything with a honest being writing is like seeing. Thanks luv! X

Have a beautiful day hun X