Blindfolded in the Dark

Coming around consciously to blue skies,
and the sound of fireflies deeper through
the winds whiskey cries

Moving faster and faster on pace for disaster
Sitting alabaster and as cold as the steel upon
my facade…listening intently while blindfolded
in the dark marked with the stench of oil

Wound so tight like a coil

I am dizzy

Lost in my whereabouts

Unable to free the doubt undertone shouts
entering eardrum sequence in accord with
elevated heartbeats sending a sense of fear
or clarity running down my spine

In a situation feeling the tears start
The whole world falls apart and opens-up
to take me in, shine some light and lift me
above with might

Helping the traumatic fright so that becoming
bright with collectively explainable insight
Writing myself in the dark hindsight

Author's Note

Knowing your own way through your own place



Truly Enjoy!!!

Reviews

[Muse]

Unable to free the doubt undertone shouts
entering eardrum sequence in accord with
elevated heartbeats sending a sense of fear
or clarity running down my spine

I think the synapses in my brain just cried from the sheering sharp clarity that came from being blind.

shine some light and lift me
above with might

if only a light could be that bright.....

[...]

plain and simply, I am just blown! You amaze me :) Wondrous territories your mind travels...I love to tag along :) A brilliant soulful artist you are, Empirik!

[Empirik]

That is so kind...you are welcome anytime! Thank you so much Lynn. :)

[Kenneth The Poet]

One hell of a write. Favorited.

[moo to the world]

awesome poem i enjoyed it completely

[Empirik]

Thank you so very much!!!

Loved this comment too... thank you moo

[Empirik]

There it is finally... was waiting for this one since 4 weeks ago probably...

"the winds whiskey cries" lovely metaphor... it says a lot.
I'm feeling sorry for you, you feel like this.
The dizzyness is so recognizable... as you know why

When the perfect doubt knocks on your door, the inner core
Shall take revise. And as I read you it did...
Or I can only be proud, or I can be worried... say me what to be :)
And I shall merge more into the thoughts of thee.

Unless you're too blindfolded...

Love and light,

Always,

E.L.

[Empirik]

I know, thank you so very much!!! I write a little less, but it is so meaningful! X

You're welcome, my quill is yours, and I try to feel what you feel. I know it is that meaningful, as you're a true speaker in moments only when it is needed.

X

[Empirik]

As I know you do too :)

:)