heartless soul

this one is for someone that i really liked named Mel she is amazing

rose to rose

love to dove

flower to flower

everyday wishing that i had a chance

praying to god for her love

not understanding why she did

just taking the time out of my day for her

turning the lights off and shuting the door

hopefully she wont hear the sound of a heart breaking from the inside

i just cant pull myself forward

as i whip away the tears

i'll be in a different place

beyoud a world without pain and hate...

my love is more than poetry

more than a story

its for her to find the lost pieces of a broken heart

Reviews

[Jai Garg]

You do start off well and end with a punch!

I like the way you write.

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

thanks :D I try my best