forgive

My mind wonders upon your breath
While my heart weakens at your touch
I hold on to this pain before my death
As this black cloud holds to much

I caused you nothing but pain
Watched you cry in front of me
My heart was to numb to see the pain
It was love but I was too blinded to see

I love you and I want to make this right
I might be to late but I will still try
I'll hold you until the end with all my might
If the pain is too real i will be the one to cry

I may not be the first but I'll be the last to bleed
Forgiveness and One last chance is all I need

Reviews

[Edizen]

There were a few instances where you used to instead of too but overall its a beautiful poem and I love your work. keep it up.